Love+and+Marriage

February 16th-Peer Revision of Marriage Contracts Directions:
 * SHARE YOUR DOCUMENT FOR A PEER TO REVISE AND EDIT **
 * Add a new tab and open your Marriage Contract in Google Docs.
 * Share your contract with the person assigned on the purple card.

__Ideas for Comments __  spelling, grammar, mechanics sentence fluency clarity or unclear sentences questions or possible misunderstandings that the audience may have appropriate use of language suggestions for language or word choice missing requirements/sections positive specific comments
 * REVISE AND EDIT THE DOCUMENT THAT WAS SHARED WITH YOU **
 * Open the Marriage Contract of the person who shared with you. (This may not be the same person you shared your document with.)
 * Read through the contract and add 5-10 comments by clicking on the word or line that there is an error or that you have a question or comment, and click on "Insert" and "Comment". Type your comment in the bubble provided. __Before you begin commenting, add a comment with the statement "PEER REVIEWER: Your Name", so Schafer knows who made the comments.__
 * When you have finished adding a 5-10 comments, print out the document with the comments and hand to the person, so they have a copy and are aware that you are finished with your peer review.


 * REVISE AND EDIT YOUR OWN MARRIAGE CONTRACT **
 * Consider all the comments that your peer made on your document, and revise and edit your copy as needed.
 * After you have considered each comment, delete each comment by clicking on the trash can located at the top of the comment.
 * Make any final revisions and edits.

You will need to turn in the following:
 * <span style="color: #000000; font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive;">TURN IN YOUR CONTRACT **
 * <span style="color: #000000; font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive;">Rough Draft with first revision notes (bottom)
 * <span style="color: #000000; font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive;">Peer Review copy with the comments (middle)
 * <span style="color: #000000; font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive;">Final Copy (top)

<span style="font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive; font-size: 90%;">__Prepared Graduates:__ Effectively use content-specific language, style, tone, and text structure to compose or adapt writing for different audiences and purposes <span style="font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive; font-size: 90%;">1. Style, detail, expressive language, and genre create a well-crafted statement directed at an intended audience and purpose <span style="font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive; font-size: 90%;"> e. Critique own writing and the writing of others from the perspective of the intended audience to guide revisions, improve voice and <span style="font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive; font-size: 90%;"> style (word choice, sentence variety, figurative language) and achieve intended purpose and effect
 * <span style="color: #800000; font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive; font-size: 120%;">February 15th-Marriage Contract Specifics **
 * <span style="font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive; font-size: 90%;">Standard: 3. Writing and Composition **

<span style="font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive; font-size: 110%;">__Prepared Graduates:__ Effectively use content-specific language, style, tone, and text structure to compose or adapt writing for different audiences and purposes <span style="font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive; font-size: 110%;">2. Ideas, evidence, structure, and style create persuasive, academic, and technical texts for particular audiences and specific purposes <span style="font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive; font-size: 110%;"> c. Address audience needs and anticipate audience questions or misunderstandings <span style="font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive; font-size: 110%;"> d. Select and build context for language appropriate to content (technical, formal)

<span style="font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive; font-size: 120%;">Definition of Love <span style="font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive; font-size: 120%;">Definition of Successful Marriage (Goals and Priorities) <span style="font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive; font-size: 120%;">Description of the Perfect Partner
 * <span style="color: #800000; font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive; font-size: 120%;">Marriage Contract Requirements - Content **

<span style="font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive; font-size: 120%;">Work <span style="font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive; font-size: 120%;">Family and/or Child-rearing and Roles <span style="font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive; font-size: 120%;">Decision Making <span style="font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive; font-size: 120%;">Household Maintenance and Roles <span style="font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive; font-size: 120%;">Communication <span style="font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive; font-size: 120%;">Miscellaneous Topics <span style="font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive; font-size: 120%;">Attitude and Grounds divorce or separation
 * <span style="color: #800000; font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive; font-size: 120%;">Sections of Marriage Contract - Content **

<span style="font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive; font-size: 120%;">Formal/Technical Language including any legal jargon <span style="font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive; font-size: 120%;">Appropriate format for purpose and audience <span style="font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive; font-size: 120%;">Appropriate for intended audience <span style="font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive; font-size: 120%;">Defines and achieves intended purpose <span style="font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive; font-size: 120%;">Rough Draft (Checked in class yesterday) <span style="font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive; font-size: 120%;">Revised Copy (Check today before you can go to the lab) <span style="font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive; font-size: 120%;"> content, formal/technical language (including legal jargon, format, <span style="font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive; font-size: 120%;"> anticipated audience questions or misunderstandings, sentence variety
 * <span style="color: #800000; font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive; font-size: 120%;">Standard Requirements **

<span style="color: #800000; font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive; font-size: 160%;">50 Points Possible - Final Copy is due Thursday!

<span style="font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive; font-size: 150%;">Go to the Discussion Tab and take part in the discussion. You will need to read the article below to answer question #3.
 * <span style="color: #800000; font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive; font-size: 140%;">Classwork on February 11th **

<span style="font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive; font-size: 150%;">Read one the following articles: <span style="font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive; font-size: 150%;">[] <span style="font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive; font-size: 150%;">[]

<span style="font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive; font-size: 150%;">Sample Marriage Contracts <span style="font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive; font-size: 150%;">[]

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<span style="font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive; font-size: 150%;">Begin typing a draft of your Marriage Contract. A typed and printed draft is due on Monday.